Here are my thoughts.
The soundscape is very rich and well-developed. The instruments compliment each-other well. Had it been me, however, I would have lowered the volume on the simple tone that gradually decreases in timbre.
Also, this song does not appear to have an ending. I find that... disturbing.
You obviously have a talent for this, though. Keep it up.
Thank you for the review!
Listening to this again, the tone is definitely a bit too loud, I intentionally left the track a bit "rough", and I'm intending on coming back to it later and cleaning it up some.
The lack of an ending was entirely intentional, there's a story behind this track, which I might end up expanding upon in an album, and the lack of an ending ties into the story, so that is 100% staying the same. Also, I just kinda like the way it sounds.
Glad you enjoyed the track, and I hope I addressed some of the issues you had!