Funny that you call it a rough. To me it appears to be as finished as it can be. As an opening to a bigger story it does exactly what you expect: to make you curious of the rest, of what is going on. You created the right atmosphere for the hectic opening, in image and sound alike. Really like how you use the contrast of darkness and light. The transition of the brutal scenes on the surface to the almost tranquil underwater scene feels almost like a relief. Hats off to you.
Reviews for "Sorelle and The Bellowstone::Arrival (P1)"
Totty responds:
Thoughtful review,. thank you- I am really glad you enjoyed!
The artwork and visuals are captivating and indicate a decent amount of effort and talent. However, the scenes felt a bit disconnected and couldn't completely engross the viewer into the story. I think a voice dialogue would have been perfect to tie things together, as other reviewers have already noted.
Beautiful, clever use of 2D static images combined with effects to make a stunning animation.
I really enjoyed the epicness and the amazing imagery!
For the next part I hope to see more of the overall story. Can't wait to see it
Great Visuals.