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Reviews for "Future Fragments - NEW Electric Level Demo"

Love the game, just wish multiple monsters could bang at once <3

hentaiwriter responds:

They can in the Patreon version out for the Ice Level :) Thanks for the review and rating!

really fun to play! turns out I'm great at this game, but still loved it!

hentaiwriter responds:

Thanks for the review and rating; glad you liked it a lot! :)

Loved it, but as MrTekTite said, it would be nice if each mob had more than one sex scene. Maybe make one have a lesser probability of happening to make the player want to lose more times to see it (so that they play the game for longer c:)

The only thing I felt awkward was the jumping. I wasn't used to being able to completely stop moving forward mid-air when not pressing an arrow key, which made it really troublesome to pass one of the jumping stages (the hitbox of the pillars is too small D:<)

Just one question. Can you actually kill the last boss? I managed to flee from it, but no matter how I hit it, I couldn't kill it

hentaiwriter responds:

Hey, thanks for the review and rating :) to respond here;

- Each mob does actually have multiple sex scenes; there's one for when you're stunned, and one when you're at 0 HP. Some enemies have multiple ones too, but they're not in this demo. We also have a large number of sex scenes during cutscenes that are only accessible by actually doing good, so you get to see sex whether you lose or win, just different kinds of it.

- The immediate stop while jumping is intentional for precision while platforming; as a personal taste kind of thing, I'm not a fan of games where your momentum continues once you jump and you have very little control mid-air, as it leads to a lot of frustrating platforming. That said, there are a number of powerups that will affect the physics of the game, and one of them DOES retain your momentum after letting go of the arrow keys, so you might prefer that :)

- You can't kill the boss; each of the bosses in the game have to be dealt with in different ways, and this one, you just need to get to the end of the map. The Ice Boss can be defeated, but you have to use some ingenuity to figure out how to do it, as it's sort of a puzzle-based boss.

Thanks again :D

Good stuff. im def into it but If I might throw a few suggestions

-More enemy variety Or another scene for each enemy say if they approach you from the front vs the behind when dazed. somthing to keep it interesting when your going through 10 sectors facing the same enemies

-alter the flying deamon so he stays closer to your level. (cause after going a long fucking way on areas i have to wait for elevators, clearing out enemies. and geting 80% through a room only ot get stuck on 2 small sections to jump between and that jackass demon... its really anger inducing. specailly after repeating the same area more then 5 times -_-

otherwise this is hot as hell.

hentaiwriter responds:

Hey, thanks for the review and rating! To respond to your concerns;

- Each level has four enemies and a boss, and will eventually have a trap or two (like the Ice Level in the Patreon demos, how we have a trap where enemies will swipe at you from doorways to grab you). So in total you're getting 25 enemies across 5 levels, plus the traps :P

- In the current version, you'll have a multitude of powerups and more ways to deal with the flying demon (like firing upwards or firing downwards while jumping), so he's a lot easier to deal with in that regard.

Thanks again!

Ok I'm gonna talk about the good parts 5 mins in
-solid controls
-very nice sprite work
-pretty good level design
-sexy voice actress sounds

the down side *some may be nit picking
-some voice needs more emotion than "hmm" "hah~ " I suggest you ask your voice actress to re record some sounds while imitating the sprites actions for more impact.
-I'm comparing this to games like castlevania, metroid and megamanX series
and I have to say you got the metroidvania thing down but your game suffers from x4-x6 camera problems where you have to take a leap of faith because you can't see below your character at some points.
-some sound effects could be better like her bullets sound
-she can crouch but can't shoot while crouched some megaman games suffer from this so if your sprite artist is up for it try give her the option to crouch and shoot so she can maybe avoid incoming projectiles while shooting low.

I look forward to testing any more demos of this you have to offer. the last thing you want is weak voice acting like english megamanx4

hentaiwriter responds:

Thanks for the review and the rating! To respond to some of these;

- We definitely intend on having the voice actress re-record a lot of their lines. That said, Talia is a bit of a stoic character, and won't usually be as intense as say, Faye or Vie during sex scenes.
- You can look down below you by pressing the down arrow and holding it, and after the Fire Level, no maps have instadeath-jumps. We also have a minimap in the latest version that shows the area around you more clearly, to prevent anything like that even more.
- We've replaced almost all the sound effects in the current version of the game too, with custom ones.
- We not only have the ability to crouch while shooting for her in the latest version, we have multiple powerups that allow you to do different gameplay styles as well :P

And agreed on the voice acting!