I will say that this was better than the vocals version. But, overall, the song just isn't that good. The level two part sounds pretty cool at the start, then starts to lose that coolness before level three. That's where about 2.5 of the stars I'm giving you came from.
I've noticed that most of your recent sings lack that Waterflame style of all your old songs. They just feel really....boring. Just my opinion, though.