Like old day when you see Chaos Girl :D Good work - For people who are new to 08jackt projects I propose to make timeline for them to know where to start :P History about this ,,world" is bigger than i expected when i started watching this. If somebody want - make a wikipedia on it. Im not good at english to make it alive. Also its easy to forget something ^_^ Anyway after each episode we reveal more than we should expect so why i love 08jackt progress about sharing us a fascinating plot. So im waiting for next episodes :)
Reviews for "Chaos Eclipse"
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DEFINITE SPOILERS! Check out these series first: Dead Detention 1, Chaos Girl, Dead Detention 2
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That's seriously Ami!? But she dies in all four endings of the Chaos Girl finale! The only way she's alive must be because of what Shia said: "Every time [Armageddon Children] come close to [death], we just regenerate." I wonder if that's also how Max survived getting blasted by magic several times in Dead Detention (DD) 2, and if Armageddon Children not dying includes Tom, even if he didn't escape that explosion...
I can only guess how Ami got a scar on the right side of her face. If activating Dark Friday is still the canon ending to Chaos Girl, she'd have to have been in other battles or her only possible scar would be on her chest. Otherwise the next best reason for her having a facial scar is if she got hit in the face in endings 2 or 3, possibly 4. Regardless, ending 1 to Chaos Girl still seems most likely to be canon based on Chaos Christmas, and since it takes more than 2 months to rebuild a whole city (which completely debunks ending 4 being canon).
Lore aside, this is yet another good entry from 08jackt. It's good to see a new mystery and more good artwork.
What I'd like to see in the next episode:
1. A bit of backstory from Ami to confirm which ending of Chaos Girl is canon and *find out what happened to the guy before Aoi (there's nothing saying he's still alive, dead, or what),* maybe also info on when Ami "regenerated" and/or how she got that stone.
2. At least a preview of the significance of that stone. Either some minor display of what power it holds or a quick explanation from Ami would do.
3. Maybe have the decision points be a bit more complex? Even though there were a fair number of things going on, I got the canon ending on the first try, so it feels a bit obvious, maybe too obvious, as to what the smart things to do are (not risking getting killed by Ami followed by not trusting the leader of the guys who almost killed you for seemingly no reason).
Other Universe .08 things:
1. I wonder if Stella from Chaos Christmas is going to show up in here, depending on which ending to that story is canon...
2. As for DD 2's after story, the least I'd like to find out is what Max is going to do with his life now that his school blew up and his mom died. The most I'd like to know is where Sora/Naomi/Haru is headed, Tom's fate and Clear Moon's next move.
3. I'm also wondering if Sora/Naomi/Haru ever heard/figured out that their dad got killed a number of times and what their initial reaction to that was...
P.S.
I've documented at least most of the lore of Universe .08, mainly the stuff Clear Moon has been a part of so far. I noticed you responded to Eltrummor's review saying Chaos Eclipse is 10 months after Chaos Girl. I see an issue: The first episode of Chaos Girl says Ami had been blending in at New Heart High for a few weeks (the nameable player character said this) before those events happened. Furthermore, based on the DD 1 in-between episodes, Ami enrolled there the same day the zombie outbreak happened (assuming the subject 44 calls Max's Mom were getting weren't flashbacks, and there's no indication that they are, so I'm assuming they aren't). To top it off, "a few weeks" from October 31st is November 14th (two weeks later) at the earliest .
So either...
A. Ami brainwashed New Heart High's principal so well that the whole school thought she'd already been around a few weeks as a side effect.
B. The nameable player character from Chaos Girl either mixed things up or got individually brain washed earlier that day (which would be legit due to time zones, night in America might be day in Japan).
C. Chaos Eclipse is actually 9 months after Chaos Girl rather than 10, otherwise it should say September 2015 in here (also, does Japan have public school classes in session in August? just wondering, because I don't know stuff like that).
D. You got the specifics of the timeline mixed up. It wouldn't be the first time; you got AM and PM mixed up in Dead Detention 1 episode 2.5 when you said Oct 30th at 1:30 AM was 14 hours before the Friday of the zombie outbreak (more like 38 hours, so you were a day off there).
A few weeks isn't a terribly large time gap for a universe-wide story that spans some years with most events happening in a single day (at least the interesting parts), but I did have that red flag go up in my head.
Yup !
Cool game hah ...
I like it !
It is a really good story would be better if it was longer but I understand why it isn't. Quick question is this before or after chaos girl?
JackAstral responds:
It's set 10 months after :)
sup' Jack, would you believe me if I said that I got the Canon ending at my first try?
anyways, I liked this new serie that you started, I wonder how long this will go.
put yeah, I'm pumped for the next chapter! also, is this before alula falling?
JackAstral responds:
Cool, thanks ! It'll be 3 parts long
Yup, this is set just a couple weeks before Alula Falling :)