All I can say is refine the writing, add sounds, and keep on going
All I can say is refine the writing, add sounds, and keep on going
Needs music...but good
I like the story so far! And the art is gorgeous! I was actually sad when it came to an end.
Its good so far. I like the style, and I really like how the story is set. Its great so far. However, I feel like you should have held off releasing it for just a bit longer. It was just a bit too short and uneventful. The game mechanics weren't demonstrated as well as they could have. Apart from that the only issue is a few grammatical errors here and there.
needs sound effects