Pointers
-Esenario
-Mas movimientos
A lo que me refiero caon mas movimientos es que los personajes tenian "poses fijas",dales mas movimientos!!!
Reviews for "The Strongest Preview"
CheveLoco responds:
ahh ya se..pero fue mi primera animacion ke hice..ya ni sikiera segui con ella..solo hice el preview..:P
Pointless
that was crap.
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the characters looked like human versions of sonic and knuckles har har. anyways the drawings were ok for flash and the animation was good especially for a newbie. anyways keep working on flash, you could get real good one day.
Good first try
Your character drawings weren't bad for your 1st flash film. The preview wasn't to bad if you rate it by graphic quality & presentation. Though, over all, the preview was lacking in story content, meaning we have no idea what kind of story we're previewing for, ya know? It didn't leave us wanting to wait until the actual film comes out.
Maybe......
This might be good but I saw no real motion, all I saw was some pictures that flickered back and forth a lot. I hope that in the real movie it will be more than that. I gave you a decent graphic score because those pictures were good and I can see some talent but we'll have to see how the final product turns out. But, good for now.