Interesting critic to the actual society,
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Interesting critic to the actual society,
nice work. fun art style and animation
What the heck??? Good animation, confusing plot.
The animation was okay, as was the sound, it could use improvement though. The main problem lies with the plot, it was too shallow and didn't really go anywhere. The punchline, if you could call it that, didn't make any sense and had no buildup.
Thank you for the criticism, and I'll try to improve the sound by the next one, but I think that part of why the plot's bad is because of the time I had and working on this alone wasn't helping, if you liked it thank you and if you didn't, thank you for looking at it and giving me your thoughts.
Animation is good. Story and sound garbage