It was... intriguing at first.
Certainly had a nice atmosphere, what with the music and such. Buuuut it also had some isssues.
For one, performance issues, a bunch of typos in the text - (even in one of the coded diary entries) and the problem with the final diary page.
In the same vein, a lot of the dialogue felt fairly awkward - the charachters talked in somewhat ...weird ways?
I didn't particularily like the dialogues because of that, and -quinn- felt more annoying than anything.
The choices in game felt inconsequential - SPOILERS ahead - Like, the option not to get in on the investigation? that seems like an unlikely choice. Also, having to decide whom to arrest without really that much conclusive evidence doesn't feel all that "sleuth-y". so yeah, that was meh.
But the biggest issue I had was this - so many waste bins everywhere, and I could not interact with ANY of them! (But seriously, adding more than just those one-word descriptors would be a great way to add more depth to the game.)
On the upside, the Mirror caught me off guard :D
To make it short: I think the premise is interesting, there's definitely something to it, but I can see a lot of issues, primarily with the dialogues. Don't let my opinion discourage you, though.
Thanks for creating :)