I like the story so far and the art
I like the story so far and the art
Thanks! I've just had a few comments so far, so I'm curious how it's being received. Let me know if you successfully predict the killer.
The only interactivity is the choices that pop up sometimes. It would be better if there were more than just 2 choices. I like the music and sound effects. I also liked Georgina's appearance, but I didn't like her name. The story was long, which I like. It could have a better screaming sound effect. I liked how you can pick who think is guilty at the end. The previous button for the dialogues doesn't work after you choose the right suspect at the end. This game doesn't have anything visually inappropriate for teens, so the rating should be changed to teen.
Thanks for the review! I can go in and use different screams. I didn't pay too much attention to them at first because they are so short that I thought they would go mostly unnoticed. I'll go in and take a look at the 'previous text' button in each frame. I added it last, so some scenes might be missing it. Thanks! The rating was automatic, but I would guess it's somewhere in the 15-ish area.
Incredible story! I wasn't expecting this to be nearly good and long (45 minutes). I haven't seen any bugs but half of a star is missing because I didn't know who was Zed and who was Ricky. Also music is repedetive but it doesn't matter that much. Character design is fine and they are nicely drawn.
I hope there will be something like this in near future!
Oh, ha ha. Ricky is supposed to be the short one. Interesting because I had not thought about that. I will try to think of a way to make it clearer. Thanks for your support!