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Reviews for "The Bar - Chapter 1"

Poorly executed and unfinished :/ meet me at the black alley at the stormy weather and if I come h turns away. nothing else to do

Gharrot responds:

There's still one thing left to do. Pay attention to how he reacts to you and re-read the note.

I actually REALLY liked this! Its a very simple idea that COULD have improvements in the next episode (maybe some graphics/cartooning..something visual) but regardless of that its very interesting. Im really looking forward to the next episode.

ITS ENJOYABLE just needs more hun. Great job.