Great concept...but that's about it.
If you have to write the controls/how to play in the comments, then there's a problem.
It comes off as lazy, as in the author didn't want to think of a creative way to introduce the game play, or forgot.
Also, I find it odd that so many people are doing these "concept" submissions... It's like steam games and their alphas.
Hey! I agreed with Exodius7, Make a monologue! Also add running when the game climax comes. Keep the same atmosphere, I feel like something creepy is going to happen at the end so it gives a sense of a thrill. Maybe make the controls based only on the keyboard and not the mouse :p
Add some characters that have different relationship with the character if you want (:
Then at the end of the game explain how he got himself in that snowy place.
Just giving some ideas! Keep it up ^^
Thanks for your review! Interesting points, I'll give it some thought.
Interesting concept, eerie atmosphere and easy to learn controls.
Sadly, this is just a demo, but I'll be d keeping track of the game's progress.
Some things you might want to add are running, a small tutorial, more monologue (observations, for example), more backstory... Things like that. The game has potential.
It was super! I loved the atmosphere you created and the controls are easy to learn, effective and logic in the same time (I'm reffering to all those war games in wich the player can e.g. climb up a ladder and aim and shoot simultanusly). I was really thrilled because I don't usually like the "thriller" genre. movies, games, whatever, but this worked for me just fine! I 'm waiting for the rest of this project!!
Great! Glad you liked it!
wonderful atmosphere, but I need running :p
Thank you! Running is on the list ;D