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Reviews for "Fefnir - Pilot"

love it dude only thing was it seem the audio was either weirdly sounding or the mouth moved too weird other wise this is EPIC EPIC I hope someone pick up your cartoon I cannot wait to find out what deal he meant.

FrameFreak2D responds:

Thanks a lot! Hopefully we can make it happen by 2016 :D

interesting story i hope you get the funds for more episodes :)

FrameFreak2D responds:

Thanks :D

Backgrounds are amazing!

FrameFreak2D responds:

Thanks :D

Really cool animation, fighting, and music. And it makes you want to see what happens next....

This does remind me of the Heavy Metal movie for some reason.....

Great animated feature!

FrameFreak2D responds:

Thanks a lot Chaos :D

I only gave this 5 stars because it was a pilot, just getting your series idea out the door. There are plenty of issues with this specific animation though. The fight scenes seemed a little bit like they were moving through molasses. The animation was smooth and clean but it just felt like the motions slowed down in the fight scene. The lack of voice actors also caused some issues, like at the end the knight who appeared sounded exactly like the other two blue goblin guys. I thought for a second he was the one speaking. Very little of the idea was actually shown here as well, and I feel that isn't too good for a pilot, nor is a pilot good for an exposition dump. I still think a little bit of story would have went better. perhaps starting a little earlier on to show what was happening in that first scene with the mother and little girl, or showing us more about this Fefnir character.
There was really a lack of dialogue, which I feel hurts the plot a little more.