I finally got around to listening to this.
I'll be honest, the intro...wasn't very good. It felt odd and a little cluttered, especially with the random vocals.
The melody's alright. It's not that memorable or anything, but it's nice enough. To me, for some reason it felt like it was switching between upbeat and...not upbeat? I'm not really sure what to call that. :P
I don't really know why, but this song just didn't really feel right. It felt like it had potential, but wasn't executed that well. Ah well, it's probably just my taste in music.