I'll give you 2.5 stars because 3D I know modelling and animation aren't particularly easy (not particularly hard either) and what you have done is fairly passable and because it would have taken its time and effort, even if it looks like RWBY. I'll give you another half star because the voice overs are rather clean. Bluntly... the writing is generic, full of anime cliches and contains things that are really there because "cool" rather than make sense. Don't get me wrong, this kind of shit totally has a sizeable fanbase (otakus) and I predict you'll get a lot of instant 5 stars. You should do better, though, unless you were aiming for a safe video. Also, I don't know why you opt for such a low frame-rate in all your videos. It's a bit jarring.
(To your credit, RWBY has like a company behind it and it's only marginally better than your 1 person project. Take it in as you will.)