It was good in the Beginning but the end was not i want see more
Reviews for "First day at the office"
The only reason I didn't rate higher was because I wanted to see more of the shenanigans. :)
what the fuck did I just watch
I'm just gonna ignore the actual thing and talk about your art. I've seen some of your earlier stuff, and it was *okay*. Now, you're pretty much doing the same thing, and I think you may not be taking this that seriously, which isn't bad, but I think any room to improve should be used.
Your art has improved, definately, as you've started putting more detail into your characters and actually have a *style*, but your lining and shading needs improvement. I think it's mainly a matter of putting more effort into the characters, speaking of which...
You should just put more effort into your videos, period. Stock sounds I've heard before and three frame animations played over two minutes is really draining, and that makes up most of your videos. I'm not saying you NEED to go make your own sounds, but hearing that monster make the same two-second sound for a minute is annoying, and that 'dundundundunDUNDUN' clip is overplayed as hell.
TL;DR, put more effort and more detail, and your shit can be pretty good.
love it