It's a start, alright for your first game. With this piece, you left yourself a lot of room to improve.
Reviews for "Sorceresses Apprentice"
I like the witch, how she looks, her personality, and that she actually got scared once, but i hope there are more options later, or different paths, differend edings if you want.
Maybe you should make it possible to start in the middle again, i tried to translate that one color, and somehow i still didn´t found it, and started at least ten times.
However, somehow this is a nice start, even if it is a rather small game till now.
i feel generous 4 stars.
The replay from the beginning kills the fun...
Not fan of the dialogues either.
Art is nice.
Nice work. I didnt love the N word but the game was great, why docent chapter 2 work?
Bushmansmeg responds:
sorry mate, still working on chapter 2
I'll try and pump it out as soon as I can :)
To quote Doug Stanhope, "N****r is just a sound you can make with your mouth." A word has as much power as you give it. If you are offended by any word in any language that's on you.