Great animation but lacking in laughs and voice acting wasn't that good. Not the quality of the sound, but the voice itself was... it didn't have any impact.
If you need some help with sound quality, I would highly recommend this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r90Xy9eIU8E
However, for the voice itself, I would encourage to work on it, there is potential, but in the meantime, try collaborating with some of the many talented voice actors on Newgrounds.
Looking forward to you next animation. Keep on working and improving :)