Poor animation, no music, voices too forced and too near the microphone, horrible dialogue and weak script... I'd suggest a complete rework, and perhaps ask someone to write a better dialogue / script, if the author can't do it himself.
Reviews for "Dungeons and dick heads part 1"
zachdewd responds:
Well, it's supposed to be the animaniac kind of animation, have you seen those china IL youtube videos? Well yeah, it's supposed to be on that level, I could animate something great if I wanted, but I am not a full time animator and I just don't have the time.
The voices are forced because it's voice acting, you don't use your regular voice for when your voicing cartoon characters. I mean, Does bugs bunny or daffy duck have a normal voice?
And my mic barely pics up sound, so i gotta be kinda close to it, I know, I've been saving up for a new one.
And if you think the script is bad well then you can thank doug walker because this thing is a parody of his films
Also there was no music because it wouldn't of fit, the only music you need is a nice river flowing, the music of nature man.
HUGE waste of time
zachdewd responds:
It was only two minutes, not that huge.