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Reviews for "On a Spring day"

Beautiful! Sceneries, birds, the way you emphasize the motion by bringing a few swirling leafs into the picture... love it all! At the ending though, it looks like they're cuddling, but considering they just crashed through the canopy and the bluebird's face is entirely sheltered by the other's wing, there is also that slightly possibility that it's dead. I assume it's not so, but that one part could be clearer, maybe just show his face, so we can see it's smiling as the other (I do see the wing move, but that feels a bit ambiguous)!

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I can tell you've spent WAY more time doing the backgrounds than the animation. It popped out so much, that I was almost expecting a full on story, with voice actors and hardcore sound effects. We did get some beautiful animation to go along with it though. The camera work was good also. I will say that you could've squeezed a story within this minute of beautiful art!

1:00 Whelp. Story's over, Orange bird kamikazied with blue bird.

Animation is beautiful, but short on story and lacking a point. It was enjoyable to watch anyway. I guess this is purely for visuals?

You can't ask for better visuals on newgrounds. It was athmospheric, colorful, and well coordinated. The flying simulation hooked and engaged me from the beginning. This immersion, however, was interrupted by the rather confusing ending. Did they just crash and burn? Or did they retire into a snuggle after a riveting flight?

I assume its the latter, so presentation went down a grade. This part should have been clearer.

3.5 stars for excellent