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Reviews for "On a Spring day"

So sweet ! XD
Good Job! Keep Going!

Utterly breath taking, what stunning work!

profesional.
precect

Extellus responds:

Wow thanks ^^"

Beautiful! Sceneries, birds, the way you emphasize the motion by bringing a few swirling leafs into the picture... love it all! At the ending though, it looks like they're cuddling, but considering they just crashed through the canopy and the bluebird's face is entirely sheltered by the other's wing, there is also that slightly possibility that it's dead. I assume it's not so, but that one part could be clearer, maybe just show his face, so we can see it's smiling as the other (I do see the wing move, but that feels a bit ambiguous)!

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You could improve your skills in story telling. For example you could try to write a script first and think about the dramaturgy of the story you want to tell with your animation? But the art style is just wonderful! A lot to learn from, to be honest! It inspired me:)

Extellus responds:

I just went for the visual appeal in this one, but you're right. =)