Really fuckin' rad and thanks for posting it on NG. I've watched this short a lot on YouTube and appreciate the effort that went into this thing - you're awesome at staying on model/keeping the image of a character consistent.
That said, gotta treat this like a review. Everything ('specially the comedic timing - loved the pace of the pie) was on point but the perspective of that chick who pressed her back against the wall. I didn't notice she was cornered against a wall at all until like the 5th time I watched this - and that's such a tiny nitpick that I'm a douche for pointing it out, but hey. Always something to improve on, soo... you're better than me at all this... er... go get 'em?
Hope you post your toons here more often (when they're finished). I haven't been here long at all but this community kicks ass and could really use some TLC from its hot-shots right about now! (My pals all think this place is dead!)
Good luck with the SleepyCabin too!