made him drop his coffeee lol the ultimate insult
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Needs more tweening. If it had more tweening it would be perfect.
jennshiii responds:
thanks for the feedback :)
I'll focus more on tweens and inbetweens in my next animation :D
I like how you used different coloring for outlining the drawings instead of the conventional black outline.
You've carefully observed how a tim horton's cup looks and changed it into a parody cup.
These were good drawings; However, I'm taking away points for usage of the generic anime art style.
Maybe practice putting your own twist onto your anime style to create more interesting drawings.
Some degree of copying reference material is required for improvement with drawing.
Once you understand the basic mechanics of that drawing than it becomes easy to build onto that drawing.
Some anime titles create their own drawing style such as Dragonballz, Akira, Panty & Stockings, ect.
Anime often uses lights and shadows to create more polished cartoons.
I see nothing wrong with borrowing drawing styles from multiple sources because eventually your own twist get added into the mix.
I personally didn't like the drawing style used for this short animation; However, I liked the coloring and the colors used for the outlining of your brush strokes.
I like the music used for this movie because it was fitting.
You used multiple camera angles and a little bit of frame by frame in places.
The backgrounds acted as a secondary character to enhance emotions felt by your characters.
You made a neat little movie even if i hated the drawing style used.
- Mightydein
jennshiii responds:
Thank you for your honest review Mightydein :)
And I agree with you on the art style being used (tho I don't hate it XD), I understand where you're coming from. I guess I'm still trying to find a "style" that I can call mine. If you look closely you can recognise the style of Naruto and Tokyo Ghoul mainly because I admire their style and was heavily influenced here as I look at them for reference.
I'll keep your review in mind and hopefully soon I'll find a style I can call my own :)
Thanks again for your honest review Mightydien :)