Damn, this was sexy, engaging, and all around a great animation, what with the smooth movement, and great execution, with lots of character aswell, you can see that Dawn looked defeated in her eyes and movements. the backround wasn't anything special, neither was the art, but its a rule 34 animation, what did I expect? despite those shortcomings this still caught me by surprise, and its great how you used your own audio, and didn't give the characters any exaggerated features.
4.5 stars, great animation, i look forward to more of this from you in the future