Visual novels were never my thing, but I think you have a decent start here. If you decide to go forward with this, I'd add a menu keeping track of the characters and such (their names, "stats," affection level, etc.).
Reviews for "Infinite School Trouble"
nabylsoft responds:
Thank you for your feedback. By the way, this is my first flash game I ever made. Still got many things that I need to learn. =)
Not the worst simdate I've seen, but there have been better. There are a couple of things that make it bland:
1. The game is fairly linear. The choices are obvious (until Cecilia confronts you after class the first time; that seemed kind of lose-lose) and inconsequential, leading to an ending that seemed inevitable. This made it more like a moderately interactive anime, rather than a simdate. This, however, may just be because the game is incomplete (it sure feels like it.)
2. A few of the characters seem flat and uninteresting. I barely felt like I was actually in Ichika's shoes, and the NPCs around him didn't do too well to pull me into the story.
On the subject of the characters: only Cecilia seems to have anything of importance in regard to a story. I was honestly looking forward to having a separate story with, say, Charlotte or maybe Houki.
I did, however, think the concept posed at the end was interesting (albeit a little cliche.) I hope to see more, or perhaps a complete version, in the future.
Where is it?　Scene of the work Cecilia does for dangerous GUY.
It's expected.
nabylsoft responds:
I would love to include that scene. Unfortunately, this game is rated 'Matured'.. Not 'Adult'..
Well...All the characters and backgrounds came from IS: Infinite Stratos, an Anime. No originality for them but you have originality in dialogues only. 2.5, because IS: InfiniteStratos is a Harem Anime so I gave it 2.5 and Harem is my favorite.
Finish your story this is not finished you cant just leave us hanging I want more