I don't really know what to say about this. I would give my best critical reviews but I've seen some reviewers on here giving themselves their best opinions but ends up becoming insulting. All i can say, Is that You need to improve a bit more on dialogue. The Art-style is something you can't do much about but recommend you practice. This is nice for a first game but I kind of was drawn away from it, I don't know why. I would give myself all of my opinions but....I'm slightly afraid to.