The writing is good and the art was nicely reminiscent of Ren and Stimply. It's not perfect but I really would want to watch more from you in the future. It's a bit hard to understand the blue guy sometimes and the animation seems rushed.
The writing is good and the art was nicely reminiscent of Ren and Stimply. It's not perfect but I really would want to watch more from you in the future. It's a bit hard to understand the blue guy sometimes and the animation seems rushed.
Kek, pretty accurate
lol these guys need mental help
Really well done, although I felt some jokes could've been shortened down for time, this was funny to watch and I enjoyed it.
This was surprisingly entertaining! You obviously put a lot of hard work into this and it shows, but the animation was lack-luster. There are a lot of moments where it looks like you used the straight-ahead method instead of pose-to-pose, and if you continue with +2-3 minute projects like this, learning how to map out your scenes before animating them could be a great time saver. It also might translate your character's movements better if you keep the in-betweens of their swings and arcs and bips and bobs down to a minimum.
Still, the story was great, voice work was great, and the world you built melded well with the characters you created. Neat stuff!
I agree.
One of the things I want to work on more is creating stronger key poses poses for my cartoons. For this particular cartoon, my main focus was on forcing myself to cel-shade and creating pretty color palettes. I think as it went on my key poses got a little stronger, but like you said; the in-betweens could use some work. Its sorta has a weird early Simpsons look now, where things don't flow natural or look stiff-ish.
Also this is one of the most genuinely nice and overall constructive critiques I've ever gotten, so thank you sir!