Reviews for noir animation - beneath

[LadyIshtar17]

An unexpected plot twist to say the least!

You had a terrific story concept (can never go wrong with anything noirish), and I loved the moody feel from the very beginning.

While there were points in the animation that were a little awkward, like the part when he poured himself a drink, or when he was recalling his childhood, there were parts that, can I say, outshone them? Especially what lay in deeper part of the sewers.

It's the eyes that really haunted the viewer.

And that voice!

Equal parts gritty, bitter, and urban, raspy and deep, and hungry.

Loved it!

Joenu responds:

Thank you for that constructive comment!
Funnily enough I like the animation of the scenes in the office or where he's recalling his childhood lots more than the animation of what's deep down in the sewers.
Anyway, imo, the main thing is not the animation but the story. But, yeah, I'm going to try animating the next video more fluid. Cheers

[binixx]

I liked it.

Joenu responds:

Glad to hear that!

[StefAnimator]

Great animation! very creepy and a good story, you have a great voice by the way :D

Joenu responds:

Thanks, Mate.

[BloodHK47]

Eh.

Joenu responds:

Thanks for your brilliant comment;)

[boypisces]

That was extremely good, the animation, the story and the voice acting was incredible. My attention was captured from beginning to end. The only minor point I could give you is in parts it can be kind of stiff, and the pacing can be a bit off but not very often. All in all, fantastic animation!

Joenu responds:

Thank you so much! Glad, you liked it. I guess it's a little stiff in scenes where I used tweens instead of frame-by-frame animation. Something I'm definitely going to change for the next animation. I'm not quite sure what you mean by "pacing". My translator tool gives me some strange results on that;)