It was alright for a short but not that original. This has been done before many times. Having said that, I liked your animation style and you did a decent job with setting up suspense in a short amount of time. However it was too predictable, we knew what was coming already, and maybe with something unexpected or diverting from the usual straightforward story.
As far as the music, I think this is one of those times where you were wrong and music would have elevated the scare factor tenfold. I think the silence just sort of gives it a very...amateurish sound. When the viewer keeps checking the sound to see if its "on" that takes them out of the movie. You don't want that. Just my opinion. Keep it up though.
Reviews for "Carrot Nose"
ClockworkPixel responds:
I just wanted a break after working on something heavy for halloween i didnt have to make a winter animtion i never do but i like i said just wanted to wor on something simple :) glad you liked the art style
Its good but i dont really like the art style
if you used a different type of art style it could have made it more creepy.
ClockworkPixel responds:
It's not supposed to be creepy!
Couldn't load plug-in. :(
ClockworkPixel responds:
So you've gave it 0 stars even though you haven't seen it and for something that ISNT MY FAULT!