Holy shit Even though this was a draft, it was quite amazing O-0
I'm glad I decided to check back again; and you've certainly come a long way. Keep up the good work, man. ;)
Reviews for "Armed with Wings Draft"
Yeah, I can't really recommend this. I will admit that it's kind of nice to see. This isn't really a suitable website for that kind of stuff. I still thought this wasn't bad. I do like to see how the process is done. It just isn't good in itself, not enough to be a submission.
It's laid out in a good manner. I remember the elements from the game. I'm glad it wasn't a few seconds long. You'd be surprised at how many people submit stuff like that. You've done much better, obviously.
Although this portal isn't meant for unfinished works, your animation has more stars than any of my finished animations. So the problem has nothing to do with finished or not finished.
What this animation really shows, is the great sketcher you are. You should keep making that sort of animations because people like you make this portal a place for artists and creators. I've seen too much uncreative and unartistic madness-animations, so it's refreshing too see some work from a real artist.
Keep posting unfinished work! especially now, because I've seen way worse, too many times on the frontpage.
Actually, what you have is really good. The animation is smooth, and everything's reasonable well drawn, for what it is. Looks like you've got what it takes, and I look forward to seeing a real animation from you in the future!
In the meantime, tho...
Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.
And that's what makes this one such a big problem: it's COOL!! Now, everyone will want to send thru their unfinished bits and pieces, and I doubt they'll be anything like this.
If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores, which you don't want. I doubt this will get a crappy score, but when you get a finished one up, ...wow; I expect great scores!
The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission
Keep working at it, and I know you'll bring us something great!
Good luck. :)
I AM SO EXCITED!!! I expected basic, boring sequences like everyone puts when when they test animations out on their audience, but the speed and well-synched sound effects made this test much more appealing for me to watch. I get a real good sense of what you're going for, and I CANNOT WAIT.
D-SuN responds:
Thanks! The bad news is that I doubt i'll fnish these :0 In time I'll definatly start doing Armed with Wings animations