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Reviews for "Dead Detention #1"

The art is on the simple side, but it's clear and gets what's happening across without any fuss. The mini games are a bit on the easy side, so it feels more like a semi-interactive story. Some story branches could be a nice touch(with a few leading to a game over perhaps), though that would obviously take more time to write up. Good music choices.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks for the review! I might try story branches in episode 2!

*cough* bottom left corner *cough*

Really interesting. Simplicity aside, this was quite charming. I wish there were more paths choices though. :]

And I think I like Sora. I get the vibe that she's the badass little sister xD

Nice Visual Novel, even though the drawings are shitty. And I like the dialogs.

where the fck is that astronaut medal at!