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Reviews for "Dead Detention #1"

its a fun game, but, i think need a bit more colors, also, how about some turns and ends?
decisions to make who realy afects the game play
nevertheless, nice game :D

JackAstral responds:

Thanks! I might try adding branches in episode 2!

Sorry, the art style is too simple for me, but some story branches would be needed also!

JackAstral responds:

Sure, thanks for giving it a go anyway! I'll try improve the art a little in the next episode!

The art is on the simple side, but it's clear and gets what's happening across without any fuss. The mini games are a bit on the easy side, so it feels more like a semi-interactive story. Some story branches could be a nice touch(with a few leading to a game over perhaps), though that would obviously take more time to write up. Good music choices.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks for the review! I might try story branches in episode 2!

Can u make "bad ends" the next time? The people love have options.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks for the review! I definitely will the next episode!

Good.

JackAstral responds:

Thanks!