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Reviews for "Don't F With Luigi"

good movie, but i would expect more story-wise.
the animation was perfect and very swift, but man, add more than just ''luigi becoming mad'' in the story?
just a suggestion. other than that, you are good,

keep up the good work!

So apparently writing "Just baaaad" didn't cut it with the admin. Here's some constructive critisism. First issue, the audio was horribly put together. You could really feel the chopping and pasting of the various effects. You might wanna work on that. Especially the end BWAAAAH!! That really took me out of the whole animation. Your pacing was a bit problemactic as well. There was too much tension build up for what happened. The explosion animation as well, coming from a shell just felt a little forced. Finally the Luigi reveal was long and really anticlimactic. I know you're riding on the whole "Luigi Death Stare" thing but it's being done to death. The only thing that keeps it interesting is the little twists that are in each animation e.g. Luigi actually doing a drive by to gangster music. You might want to work on your humour. However, on a positive note, I quite like your artstyle, drawings and animation (hence the 1 star). You would do well in a colab with someone who knows pacing and audio production.

Art was pretty good, colours were bold.
Go open this anim in flash right now, click on any classic tween, look at the properties bar, find the Easing slider. Use it for everything. Easing is one of the most basic animation concepts.
Also if you use Newgrounds' Swivel for swf converting you won't have any lag at all, check it out here http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/creator-resources/flash-resources/swivel

Shoocharu responds:

Thanks, but I already knew about easing, it's just, most of the time I use it, it tends to f up alot, but I guess I just have to learn how to use it.
And I'll check out that Swivel thing, looks neat.

Completely unoriginal and boring. Even the "suspense" was totally boring.

Better than Luigi death stare for sure. I guess that it's not Mario kart 8 because that green shell would have hit Mario otherwise.

Aim bot green shells!!!!!!!