Mixing Mad-World and the sound of rain was very reflective and sets the background for the story really well. This is the UK, rain, gray and cold, and often a very insular culture.
This is well done; the placing it in the Adventure category is appropriate, I don't think all Adventure games have to be interactive.
At the end, and even as I write this review, I am left feeling sad. Not because of the protagonists experience and fate, but for what kind of world we have made as the result of not caring about and loving each other. And it's such a small world, and we can do oh, so much better.
Thanks for sharing your work with us at NG.
Reviews for "Car 166 [Visual Novel]"
JackAstral responds:
Thank you for the kind words
Wow. This is amazing. Great job.
JackAstral responds:
Thank you :)
hmmm...it is great game
Very gloomy music, I enjoyed the bleak background to go with it. Great sound effects used, fantastic background design as well as very intricate details on the artwork. The movements in game were pretty cool, especially with how fluid they were as I barely see that in visual novels. The character design was REALLY realistic. That certainly was a pragmatic scenario. You have specific phrasing, although you may want to change it up a bit. For example, you described the umbrella as "grey" and shortly after used the same phrasing for the stone pavement. You could've described the density of pavement, the holes, the cleanliness, the feeling of standing on it, the things surrounding it, stuff like that instead of being redundant. You could also have an in-game cursor as it was difficult to see where my mouse was playing. I didn't read the description until the end and..I'm pretty impressed overall.
good story i find my self in this story i hate my country cant say the reasons.
Agree that there is nothing but death, nothing but death...
JackAstral responds:
Thanks