This is a fun and humorous, tongue in cheek point n click game with some cool 90's PC speaker inspired music.
The graphics were also very reminiscent of early Sierra Online games from that era, well done!
As others have stated, there are few minor grammatical errors, but nothing game breaking.
Another thing is you might want to disable the ability to use the tab button to find items / points of interest to encourage exploration, because sometimes the temptation to instantly know where all the hot spots are is too great ;D
I also was hoping that the game would be longer, have even more witty dialogue, and have more stuff to interact with.
Other than that, I'm really digging the direction you're taking with this style of game, and it's a nice addition to your roster (Mafia Stories / Ultimate Death Trap series = good stuff)
I'll be keeping an eye out for your next one!