Everything about this tells me that you just didn't care about the end result. The jumping is wonky, the attack is ineffective, and for some reason my health bar keeps disappearing and reappearing. Worst of all is the cliche plot, with equally cliched dialogue, and one dimensional mouth pieces for characters.
Games can be a vehicle for political opinions, but please try to remember that it has to do so in a competent way. Is a medium such as this, the message means nothing.