It had a disturbing feeling throught each chapter. Ending ruined me, and I have to admit, I got chills. Good job man, keep it up! 4.5/5 because i got frustrated every time i died. I want to go on with the story, let me go, don't kill me! But it's good in some way, you get frustrated but think "Hey hey hey, i want to know what happened, you are not stoping me you stupid lazor!"
P.S. IM NOT A MONSTER