Nice, but try observing how others do and why they have succes. Imitating is the first step.
Reviews for "stretchy-man episode 1"
Megacharlie responds:
thanks for the review but i dont understand what you mean by Imitating is the first step.
Definitely an improvement on other stuff you have And the voice acting was surprisingly no horrendous. Sadly there was not enough stretchyman-action/stretching to actually make me see the possibilities of his power. It's more of an after thought. His power should be the focal point.
Megacharlie responds:
thanks for the reveiw XD. im going to upload a trailer for that game i promised to you. or maybe i should just do a beta that you can play. i guess well see.
The voices and plotline both seem like they were done by a child. The only real humor was the talking bushes, and after that it was all downhill. The animation doesn't exactly do much to redeem it, either.
Megacharlie responds:
The voices and plotline were done by a child actually. XD
I'm giving you 3 stars for art, but it was really funny and very nice animation too. ;)
Megacharlie responds:
thanks! :) sorry about the small lack of comedy but it is the first episode so better comedy in new episodes. thanks for the good feedback! :D