Well done.There were two ways of doing the same joke here, and you handled it in the best possible way. Nicely done!
Also, as for looking like Cyanide and Happiness, don't worry about it. I know you're getting some flak from other people, and "individuality" is great and all, but ultimately, all that matters is the content you produce. If you think making it look like somebody else's content will make it better (funnier) without riding up on their fame, then really, go for it.
Thanks buddy, all they have to do is look at my other films to know that I'm not ripping them off, so thanks!
it could have been a lot better, I saw the punchline coming from the beginning, and that's maybe because a lot of jokes like that have been used a bunch of times, sorry bro
Flamingshock....y u do dis? :'(
The older I get, the shorter my attention span, so something like this is just perfect.
Well made and definitely chuckle-worthy. Excellent work.
Haha thankyou!
I believe it would have been better if he had just rolled doubles then got out LOL.
As for the animation, it was nicely done, even if it did resemble Explosm a bit.
Thanks man, it's a homage to C&H so I'll take that as a good thing.
I don't even know, it was just.. average, I guess. The animation is actually pretty good technically, but it's way too similar to C&H to be considered a simple homage - more like a lack of individuality (no offense, just a bit of criticism). As for the comedy itself... well, it was a little bit funny, but the punchline was way too obvious, and there is much more humor in the execution than in the joke itself. Voice acting for the most part is lacking something (it could use a little more emotion), but it is greatly compensated by the scream at the end - I have to say I did chuckle on this part :)
Anyway, keep it up! You have a great potential - work on your flaws, and you'll be a great animator.
Thanks mate, well it was supposed to be a homage to C&Hm if you look at my page I actually have a number of animating styles that I'm developing. In terms of the punchline there was no real way to hide it and I think the comedy lies in the familiarity and reliability.
I appreciate all constructive criticism so I'll think about what you've said!
Thanks for the review!