This reminds me bit of manga series called Doubt.
Those masks, the story, and the atmosphere, which
you twisted a bit. (I dont want to spoil it too much).
Was that your inspiration for this?
At any rate, this was truly interesting experience.
Reviews for "Remember Death"
this is truly outstanding. i hope to see more of this games from you :)
If I had to use one word to describe this visual novel, it would be "chilling."
I quickly got attached to the characters, which made it all the more cruel to watch them die over and over. (I should point out, however, that I'm the type who gets overly invested in video game storylines, so keep that in mind XD). I felt like I WAS Kotaro, desperate to save my friends from themselves. The premise is very creepy, and somewhat reminiscent of the Saw movies (which I, by the way, haven't seen. I just know the premise XD).
On a side note, this story reminds me a little bit of the game/anime Danganronpa, though I don't quite remember when that came out, so this might have come first.
I doubt you'll see this, Dark06Star, but if you do, you have a real talent for storytelling.
You know what, I read this at night yesterday, reached end of Chapter 2 and... had nightmares after that! Seriously! It just drills into depths of your mind! And I must say one thing: I read your stories before and you are a genius, a grandmaster of plot building. This thing is better than mixed "Saw" series and "Cube" series. A relation to these two movie series was my first thought.
It only needs some improvements:
1. Like many people mentioned the "S" needs to work fluently, sometimes I have to mash it numerous times before the dialogue proceeds;
2. Something creepy: looks like you forgot to draw Alice's right eye at the end of Chapter 2;
3. The text needs further polishing, because there are still lexical, grammar and punctuation errors.
I could help you with that, just let me know.
Ok mate, I have something to say:
My computer broke, so I played this game in my moms pc, which is the slowest machine in the world. Just so you know she buyed it in 2005 and it still have XP on it.
So, as you would imagine, the game lagged a lot. the S button didnt worked properly and everytime I had to reload the game it took ages. Some people wouldnt even play this game, well, visual novel, in those conditions. But i did, I will tell you why: Thats one of, if not the, best piece of storytelling I ever seen.
Your plot has got me to keep playing it even thought, because of my pc, it was lagging like hell. And thats what its fantastic about it. A story so good that no matter what gets in your way, you want to finish it.
With that being said, congratulations dude, what you have here is one of the best storytelling Newgrounds has to offer. Dont you ever dare to stop making other pice of arts like this one.
I look foward to playing the sequels of this, and your other games. I know I wont be disappointed.
Hails from Brazil,
Sincerely, your newest fan.