I must say this was well done! I envy your skill as an artist, the flash was proffesionally high quality, especially aided by the simplistic and darker style of drawing you have practically perfected. As for sound, it was again, very nice - there were a few snags here and there, such as the consistent lightning with a lack of thunder and the soundless yawn Tyler expresses.
I can't really fault it in many other places, the suspense was good, the story did border on generic I must note, but it is quite hard to pull off an original idea. My only quarrel lies with the nit-picks I had already stated, so for a first attempt at creating a chilling project, you've executed it extremely well.
I give you four and a half stars my good man (or woman), and I wish you all the luck with your future career - whatever that may be.
Sincerely, the Ninth Pelican.