The Good: Great artwork and nice BG music. Take a bow, because your superb art work is amazing and way beyond anything I could ever hope to produce, keeping even my relatively short attention span throughout the game.
And the Bad: As far as the concepts in the piece go, I would have to rate this: 5 Yawns. The major point of contention is that the player gets to solve humdrum puzzles consisting of washing laundry, falling asleep, and a scavenger hunt for stupid pieces to repair a lame clock. Honestly, the puzzles were a yawn party. If I wanted to perform mindless menial labor, I would be Mexican (just kidding, no offense, really)! And the finishing blow that destroys the validity of this game is the ending, which reveals that Lily and Ann are dumb as rocks, as they could have just slid down the well rope the whole frickin time? Seriously, as a story teller, you are telling us the when Lily drew water three times she didn't notice this giant @ss hole in the bottom of her cage? Really? Well, that just ruined the experience for me. To be frank, the ending sequence when Lily flies away with the spirit of Ann after fixing a jacked up clock to escape from the giant in "Jack and the Beanstalk", aka the cage master, that has chronological superpowers, was also completely lame. The graphics were great, and I was sincerely underwhelmed. Overall, I haven't done nearly enough lsd (or whatever drug I need to do) to miss a giant hole in the floor of a cage myself, or to appreciate washing laundry or fixing broken clocks. I get your obfuscated point, that we all are caged by internal and external means and what not, but that point could have been more poignant if the concept was better.
Next time, more story boarding may help so that the production artwork and smooth feel doesn't like it is masking a lame concept. Really, this level of artwork is widely appealing, and has the potential to make you big money. I was truly upset enough to write this review because I loved the quality of the artwork. Comparing the concept of this work to a game like THE CABIN, this game is meh. It could be much more with better conceptualizing.
I'm sure the next game will be absolutely perfect! Keep up the good work, and work on the not so good.