Damn dude! If I said that I completely hated this, I'd be lying.
Even with the slighty-cheesy and silly voice acting, this made me just laugh quite a bit. I loved how nicely-atmosphered the NES (8-bit) music is here. Without it blarring in my ear to the point of annoyance it was edited to actually sound listenable. I also love your art style and animation, too. The overall wackiness you put into this is just so likable. I also liked how that one dude was trying so hard to not act like Kuwabara from Yu Yu Hakusho.
Overall this is some pretty great writing and animation. Keep it up.