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Reviews for "Shattered Heaven Ep. 1"

like the idea and animation. a few things good use some extra attention but its one of the better animations i have seen in the past few days.

AdamTilford responds:

Thanks. Yeah, there's still a lot for me to handle. I'm overall happy with this as it's a big improvement from my previous animations. A lot of the issues I'm working on improving for the next episode.

I thought it was pretty damn great. Can't wait for some real fights. My only real issue is the audio. It ranged from soft to blaring. If you can normalize it before you put it all together, it should sound more consistent. Keep up the good work.

don't think you needed to include a long narration at the start. use your writing skills to tell the back story as you go along.

This has some really good potential, i can't wait to see how this expands and evolves :) I would say to make each episode a little shorter, but you did needed to introduce the history and and stuff so thats understandable. I would also attempt to make the characters as unique as possible when you animate them, especially in the female characters, they all just lose a bit of personalisation compared to the still at the end.

However, i know how tough it can be creating such in depth and lengthy content, and you've got a one-up on me because you're actually producing content. So once again, i can't wait to see how you, and this animation evolves :D Good Work :)

It has potential for sure i recommend doing something to even out the audio nice story tho cool charecters too the main turn off is the audio for me

AdamTilford responds:

Appreciate it. This is also from 2013 and before I got a friend on board to handle the audio which is around the 4th episode. 1 and 2 were done during a rough time in my life and were essentially me just trying to work out of the funk. 3 is a middle ground, 4-6 are solid with pacing for the finale.