I think its done good, i would have preferred better cars :D But for the first piece its nice in my opinion!
Reviews for "Ferrari"
hania responds:
I agree! I'll keep at it and one day, re-make this... with amazing cars! :D
Good things first: Music is beutifully done and at times, hilarious, and once again, you have the voice of a godDAMN angel. The lyrics were amazing...Just, amazing! :D
Bad things last: The animation is.....Well, it's better than most first tries at least. Hell, you did better than i could in 11 hours, instead i was just dicking around with all the options having no idea what i'm doing. So, good first try! And next time, get someone to help you with flash so you can make some great quality music videos!
To be honest, for your first animation, you did an incredible job! Like most people though, I'd agree that you need to work on the fluidity of the animation. Your style as such is fine as everybody draws their people and objects some way, although I would recommend making some of the edges look a bit less choppy. As for the fluidity, you've basically only done the starting and finishing point for a motion in your work, hence the absence of fluidity. Although it is more work, try adding more intermediate steps and raise the frame rate accordingly. In any case, keep it up! Your work shows a lot of promise.
hania responds:
Thanks! I do have a LOT to learn; and hopefully people don't mind me posting my learning curves on here ;) Thanks for the support and great review! I totally agree about making things a lot more fluid; and that will come with understanding the inbetweens more. I've got my work cut out for me... and I'll love the whole journey ;)
You have great music, and it was an enjoyable theme, but i would've co-oped with someone for the video. It looks like you used a windows paint program, but even then I've seen some pretty amazing work come out of that program. And if you already had the music, why spend so little effort of the graphic display. And 11 hours, that's plenty of time to made a half decent character and, a more than Mario kart, Ferrari, especially sense you didn't put any time into actually animating any real motion. But, at least it's not a bad photo shopped realistic animation. But all criticism aside, congrats on your "first born" and may you learn and produce better products in the future.
hania responds:
The thing about it is that I want to be self sufficient with making visuals for my music. So as much as I could have others do the animating for me, I really want to dive head first into it myself. With time and practice, I'll make myself get better. Reviews like yours and most others so far are really helpful and I take everything you say on board. I will take more time in future to add more detail and clean up my drawings! Good to have the support. Cheers!
i will vote 5 for the songs sake as it was well written and sang beautifully. but your animation requires.... more animation. this was a pile of quickly hashed scribblings and tweens. i will admit i enjoyed the tard face it was amusing. but i think the work done here was rushed and unpolished. you have proved you can animate. will you take a step and improve? I hope so. you got looks and a wonderful singing voice. you could make a trifecta. i see you spent 11 hours on this. you could have spent more and had an animation that matched your song. :) go for it.