I think its done good, i would have preferred better cars :D But for the first piece its nice in my opinion!
Reviews for "Ferrari"
hania responds:
I agree! I'll keep at it and one day, re-make this... with amazing cars! :D
Good things first: Music is beutifully done and at times, hilarious, and once again, you have the voice of a godDAMN angel. The lyrics were amazing...Just, amazing! :D
Bad things last: The animation is.....Well, it's better than most first tries at least. Hell, you did better than i could in 11 hours, instead i was just dicking around with all the options having no idea what i'm doing. So, good first try! And next time, get someone to help you with flash so you can make some great quality music videos!
So first off, the music is fantastic as always, and the lyrics were delightfully witty in many ways; I'd probably give the song itself a 5 in the audio portal. I liked the art style for the most part too, kinda like a trendy graphic art style going on, but the animation wasn't particularly...er, animated; that is to say it kind of felt more like a slide show. You had some really good ideas but a little extra in terms of backgrounds and fps might have really brought it to life. Nonetheless, good job for a first animation!
The song and the quality of the audio were great. So was the script. But the animation need quite some work, like backgrounds are more fluidity. Still the art style is original and quite good for first time.
Keep practicing !
hania responds:
Noted! I took what you said on board and created another short thing which I'll upload soon. I focused on backgrounds, settings and fluidity of motion. Provided, there's no "character animation"; I more focused on animating the screen for effect. You'll see. :p
To be honest, for your first animation, you did an incredible job! Like most people though, I'd agree that you need to work on the fluidity of the animation. Your style as such is fine as everybody draws their people and objects some way, although I would recommend making some of the edges look a bit less choppy. As for the fluidity, you've basically only done the starting and finishing point for a motion in your work, hence the absence of fluidity. Although it is more work, try adding more intermediate steps and raise the frame rate accordingly. In any case, keep it up! Your work shows a lot of promise.
hania responds:
Thanks! I do have a LOT to learn; and hopefully people don't mind me posting my learning curves on here ;) Thanks for the support and great review! I totally agree about making things a lot more fluid; and that will come with understanding the inbetweens more. I've got my work cut out for me... and I'll love the whole journey ;)