I think you did pretty well with this. The animation was nice, although it was difficult to distinguish which character was which because they both look nearly identical. The effect near the end was nice, where you showed both outcomes at the same time, although, yet again, it was difficult to distinguish which character was which, so it was a little confusing. The music fit the video pretty well, even though I'm not into that sort of music, I still enjoyed it. I did actually feel empathy for the characters, but that may just be because I was in a similar situation once with a friend (luckily she didn't succeed before an ambulance got there). All in all, it's very good. I'd keep the art style and animation style. The music could be better, but it works pretty well anyway. I'll be keeping an eye on your stuff from now on.