I really love your character design and the way you made your vampires look. I especially thought the ears were cool for some reason and the eyes. While I wouldn't have chosen a song of this specific genre, imagining me writing a similar scenario could have a similar song so I liked that. If you take anything from what I wrote though it would be that this video is excellent and I really appreciate you opening up to us and giving a relatable, emotional story by leaving your comfort zone.
It's really appreciated and I give you props, I have only written something that's related to me directly once and it happened to be a character with a very similar background. I know how scary putting certain things in perspective can be.