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Reviews for "Cartoon Genders"
The animation is nice and your style is good.I chuckled a little bit but the voice quality kinda ruined it for me.The voice ACTING was good but you need to get better quality for recording it in future projects.The idea was clever btw but if the voice quality was better i would gave this 4 stars because sometimes i could not even understand what they where saying.But good flash.
looool epic work :D
ba ba ba COOL BA BA BA MAYBE BA ba ba ba ba ba ba ba hu
I joined becasue of this video finally. Having seen a lot of the criticism on this, to other members I am going to say UNFAIR! Spend money is not necissarily an answer to solving the issues of this video. If you are going to criticize someone BE NICE unless their work sucks that bad. With this said:
The quality of animation was indeed there. I could barely understand what was being said though. This one has potential and needs to be reedited so that the real comedy can be unfolded to us like a loud wet fart executed by an old bulldog during afternoon tea. What I am trying to say here is this is funny.
Suggestions for editing: Make the picture of Shaggy and Scoobie last at least one second longer. One thing that kills it for a lot of good jokes is when the joke itself is presented so fast it either barely registers or doesn't register at all like an attempt at subliminal programing. I see it a LOT on a lot of TF2 Parodies on Youtube where a message during an action scene will pop so fast it takes MULTIPLE passes of hitting the pause in the are to get that ONE frame the animator slipped on us to read the message or see an image intended to get a reaction out of us. The Shaggie/ Scoobie picture is a shock joke but you cannot kill someone with electrocution if you don't hold the switch down long enough!
Now for the audio issue. It sounds to me like you were trying like mad to compensate for the persistent POPPING PEEEEEEs while recording. You do not have to buy a microphone. You really don't have top spend any money at all really to deal with this problem. Set your gain so your peaks when talking just BARELY make the meter bob in the yellow with the only exception when you raise your voice a lot. A way to dumb down the recording when you raise your voice so you do not distort the hell out of what you are saying is to back away from the mike more than you would when talking normally. This helps you not "Flood" the mike with sound causing it to garble your recording. It will still register your raised voice as such. You will be clearer and UNDERSTOOD most of all.
Now how to kill those Pesky 'Popping Peees.' The answer is simple, Take a handkerchief or cloth napkin and make sure the material is not super thick. This works just fine. Make a diamond out of a metal coat hangar and use safety pins or whatever to sort of stretch the cloth over the diamond you made. You can stuff the hangar end into something or tape it to a table but secure this in front of the mike about four inches away and speak about a foot away from this. It creates a muffler so that the pressure of words with the letter "P" in them don't cause the popping sound you get. This is EXACTLY how professional Sound Studios suppress Popping Pees. There is no substitute for a quality mike (NOTICE I DID NOT SAY EXPENSIVE!!!) but their POP Suppression is usually achieved by the foam cover over the mike or a "Suppressor" in front of the mike. Real HIGH end mikes have a sound suppressor built in. If you look closely under the mesh of the mike head you will see foam or felt under it. Decent ones have a foam cover. BUT EVEN CHEAPIE MIKES CAN WORK IF YOU USE A SUPPRESSOR!
You got some good Kung Fu. I say revisit this one, clean it up a little, squeeze a 'five stars' out of me. Maybe even get other members who were harshing you to admit you done good and even get them to cough up the fifth star. EVERYTHING about this one was there except the super brief shock image flash and the sound quality.
The way you had that female lizard's expression go from shock, to curiosity, and then when HE realizes he finally had the Morning wood her expression goes to that of pure happiness... and then the door closes... CLASSIC!
The end though... Spike and Mike would be Proud of you! OH SO SICK! OH SO TWISTED!
Pennaz responds:
Wow man! Thank you for your massive review! I've never went this deep into the world of "recording", and I didn't expect there were so many tricks to get a better result!
I'll try them for shure, thank you once more!!