I actually wrote a really good review for this one. It was long and had quite many details on what you should keep and what I liked. But then my stupid computer just...ereased it all...and I am way too lazy to write it all again so therefore I will get it the short way.
*keep the ''next time'' thingy, hopefully for each episode.
*Flamegirl's new look was good.
*Don't fully animate the close up scenes. Make it seem like the characters are actually using the in-game emotions.
*good job on the special ending thingy.
*this is going to be the most epic series on Newgrounds when it is finished.
*I forgot what to type.
*I wish this was an actual game.
*This series has developed a lot.
*Kirb...if you stop this series, I'm gonna find you and kill you...